雅思作文独居的原因和利弊-雅思大作文关于移民话题

雅思作文独居的原因和利弊-雅思大作文关于移民话题

雅思大作文题目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries,more people choose to live by themselves in recent years.

Why is this the case?

Is it a positive or negative development for society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意：在一些国家，更多人选择独居。其原因是什么？对社会是一个积极还是消极影响。

考生需要注意，这个题目问的是对“社会”的影响。

该题属于“two-question essay”，要求考生回答两个问题，故文章结构需要四段，即1）题目改写+简要回答题目两个问题，2）回答第一个问题（2个点），3）回答第二个问题（2个点），4）总结段（总结主体两个段落的要点）。

原因：1）人们想要更多私人空间，2）与家人相处困难

消极：1）房价上升，2）社会缺少有合作意识的人才

【写作思路】

Para 1=题目改写+简要回答题目两个问题

Para 2=主体1（两个原因）

原因1：人们想要更多私人空间

原因2：与家人相处困难

Para 3=主体2（两个负面影响）

解决办法1：房价上升

解决办法2：社会缺少有合作意识的人才

Para 4=总结段

【参考范文】

In a large number of nations,there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people who tend to lead an independent lifestyle.This essay will initially outline the causes of this phenomenon,followed by a presentation of evidence to support my firm conviction that it is an adverse trend.

There are primarily two factors behind people’s tendency to live solitarily.To begin with,people expect more private space.Some are interested in reading books and writing stories,while others have a passion for singing or composing music pieces.However,if they live with their family,they will be disturbed frequently,preventing them from enjoying their time.Furthermore,some individuals fail to get along well with their family members.Young people,for instance,have formed the habit of sleeping late and waking up late,which is thought of as an extremely unhealthy lifestyle by their parents.This makes the younger generation move out,and those who secure a stable economic source will buy their own property independently.

In my opinion,this trend is detrimental to the wider community.The first point to consider is that living a solitary life may lead to a rise in housing prices.This is mainly because the more people choose to live on their own,the more houses are required.As a result,demand will exceed supply,which entails people spending more on rent and mortgages.In addition,society may lack talents who have developed teamwork and social skills.When living alone for a long time,people might rarely communicate with others,becoming isolated and emotionally immature as well as unwilling to cooperate with others.

In conclusion,individuals’pursuit of more privacy and their poor relationship with their families are the two major reasons for them to live independently.However,I strongly believe it is not wise to encourage people to live by themselves.For one thing,housing prices will rise considerably;for another,society may suffer from a dearth of people without collaborative abilities.

【亮点词汇及短语】

1.a dramatic increase剧烈上升

2.lead an independent lifestyle独居

3.live solitarily独居

4.private space私人空间

5.have a passion for对…有热情

6.composing music pieces写音乐

7.be disturbed被打扰

8.prevent…from防止…

9.fail to do不能做

10.get along well with与…相处好