2024年10月5日雅思大作文范文，雅思大作文7.0范文

2024年10月5日雅思大作文范文，雅思大作文7.0范文

雅思大作文题目：

Some people think all young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【话题分类】：教育类

【题目解析】：

题目大意：所有年轻人都必须在十八岁之前接受全日制教育。你在何种程度上同意这个观点？

题型特点：需明确表明对观点的态度并提出切题的原因。

本文论文推进：开头段引入对于全日制教育的讨论，表明自己的立场。让步段先承认所有年轻人十八岁之前必须接受全日制教育这件事，对个人和社会都有一定价值；而后立论段强调这个方案不适合所有人，同时也存在一定的执行难度。结尾重申观点。

【难点】：

这道题目中不可忽略"all"这个关键词，如果持同意的观点，那么需要论证所有年轻人都必须在十八岁之前接受全日制教育的必要性，而如果持不同意的观点，可以针对不是所有人都合适这个方案进行反驳。这类带有绝对性限定词的题目，除了’all’还可能有'only''best'等词汇，反驳都建议从这类关键词出发。

【写作思路】：

开头段：教育是多数国家最为关注的问题，它既决定了年轻人的前程，也决定了整体的社会发展。表明自己观点——我并不赞同这个想法。

主体第一段：说明所有十八岁以下的年轻群体中普及全日制教育这件事的积极影响。一方面，全日制教育让更多年轻人在接受理论知识后能更适应未来的的实践工作。另一方面，年轻人受教育程度提高，失业率和犯罪率会相应降低。

主体第二段：表明这件事并不适合所有年轻人。一方面是强制学习会引发厌学情绪，另一方面不同家庭的经济负担也是一个不能忽视的困难。

结尾段：总的来说，实行青少年十八岁之前的强制性全日制教育，初衷的确有利于年轻一代以及社会，但是政策执行必须考虑其可行性，才能保证最终的效果。

【参考范文】

Education is a major concern in most countries,which determines young people’s life prospects and the whole social development.While some educationalists suppose all young people aged under 18 should receive full-time education,I can hardly approve of this opinion.

Admittedly,achieving universal full-time education among all under-18 youngsters,to some extent,exerts a positive impact on both the students and the whole society.For one thing,full-time education provides chances for the young generation to become adequate for future practical work,after being equipped with sufficient knowledge and skills.For another,it is more literate young people in the society that help to control the youth unemployment and in the long run,lower the crime rate,since juvenile delinquency is largely caused by idle adolescents,who have been out of school from an early age.After all,the well-educated youngsters are the driving force for social progress.

However,not all young people should be forced to attend full-time education until 18 years old.Some students are not academically capable and they are eager to get rid of boring curricula as early as possible to pursue their own dreams in other fields.In other words,full-time education may deprive them of the basic rights to realize self-development,which may even lead to rebellion and strong aversion.Furthermore,the financial burden is another obstacle which cannot be ignored.Paying tuition fees for at least 18-year-period education is not affordable for all young individuals and their families.Therefore,taking the economic conditions into consideration,the youth from disadvantaged families are more willing to be engaged in the work earlier,rather than continue a longer period of high-level education,despite the higher income it may bring in the future.

In conclusion,the original intention of mandatory full-time education before adulthood is definitely beneficial to the young generation and the society,but the policy implementation must take the feasibility into account,to guarantee the ultimate effect.

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【亮点词汇及短语】

1.prospect(n.)前途

2.adequate(adj.)胜任的

3.sufficient(adj.)足够的

4.literate(adj.)受过教育的

5.juvenile delinquency青少年违法犯罪

6.idle(adj.)无所事事的

7.academically(adv.)学术上

8.curricula(n.)课程（curriculum复数）

9.deprivation(n.)剥夺

10.rebellion(n.)叛逆