2021年12月30日雅思表格题范文:雇主在4个领域招聘困难对比

2023年12月30日雅思表格题范文

2023年12月30日雅思表格题范文:雇主在4个领域招聘困难对比，关于这个问题，接下来本站就给大家慢慢解答。

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

*图形根据考场回忆，具体信息略有出入

【图形分类】

表格题

【题目解析】

根据图中信息，可以如下布局：

开头段：转述题目；

综述段：归纳不同工种之间的整体差异；

主体段1：介绍熟练工人的短缺比例；

主体段2：介绍非熟练工人的短缺比例。

主体段3：介绍技术类和管理类人才的短缺比例。

【写作思路】

开头段：该表根据行业和年份提供了关于人员短缺严重程度的信息。

综述段：总的来说，工人仍然是最抢手的职业（超过60%），熟练工和非熟练工等级所占比例都有增加。

主体段1：在所有被调查的行业中，最严重的人才短缺（从41%到47%不等）在于熟练工。2003年，商业和制造业对这些岗位的需求最大（47%和45%）。后者后来扩大到51%——表格中最高水平——而商业则下降了6%。

主体段2：相比之下，非熟练工短缺在20-30%之间。制造业仍然是主要需求来源（2003年为26%，2004年为28%），而服务业的需求增加了三分之一，达到29%。

主体段3：技术和管理级别的招聘难度规模更小，并随着时间推移而缩减。具体而言，只有不到15%的建筑业雇主认为招聘这类人才具有挑战性，而其余行业的比例则为个位数。

【参考范文】

The table provides information about how serious staffing shortages were according to sector and year.

Overall, workers remained the most sought-after profession (over 60%), with increased proportions recorded for both skilled and unskilled ranks.

The most significant shortage of manpower, ranging from 41% to 47% in all the industries surveyed, were for skilled workers. These were the most in-demand jobs in commerce and manufacturing (47% and 45%) in 2003. The latter figure subsequently enlarged to 51%, the single highest level observed, while there was a 6-percent drop in commerce.

The gaps in unskilled worker recruitment, in comparison, fell within the 20-30-percent range. Manufacturing remained the main contributor (26% in 2003 and 28% in 2004), while demand in the services industry rose by a third to 29%.

The talent searches at technical and managerial ranks were even smaller in scale and shrank over time. More specifically, fewer than 15% of building employers found it challenging to do so, while single digits were reported for the remaining industries.

(166 words)

【语言积累】

1.staffing shortages 人手短缺

2.sought-after profession 抢手的职业

3.shortage of manpower 人手短缺

4.in-demand jobs 热门职业

5.subsequently 后来

6.recruitment 招聘

7.fall within … range 在……范围

8.contributor 来源

9.rank 职级